The moon and the sun

WG7

We talked about the stupidest things

I told you that I sing

You asked how many bfs I had

When I told you. You seemed sad

I laughed the whole time 

I didn't feel like I committed a crime

You told me that you won't go to bed until I tell you

I told you no so boo hoo

I felt safe and I didn't feel apart

And then it came down to my heart

It's him but it's also the other one

One was born from the sun and the other the moon

They both make me smile and laugh like no other

Only one knows about my brother

One wants to gain my trust

The other thinks it's not a must

I know I have to do this on my own

All on my lone

Though it's hard to comprehend

Though​ either way I have to chose one in the end

Sun, moon...brightness, darkness...

If I choose him than the other I'll miss

My friend told me to stay away from the moon

She said he's gone it's to soon

The sun makes me feel like smiling all day

I just talked and talked and lay

Though​ you need both the moon and sun to have life

Only the moon knows I've used the knife

The sun hardly knows me, but he wants to know

They are both my foe

I've lived knowning the moon for so long

But now wanting the sun...Is it wrong

My life got turned around

They both want to be bound

The sun and I both love BVB

Though he seems a little creepy

The moon and I both love SH and anime

He knows my birthday's​ in may

I don't know what to do

If I pick the sun what will happen to my crew

I want the answer and I hope to find one

Will it be in the moon or sun

  • Author: WolfIsControlledByTheDemons (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 11th, 2017 15:34
  • Comment from author about the poem: It's about two guys I like. I don't know what to do. The sun is 17 and the moon is 14. They are both my friends. I just wish someone can explain it to me. Though I know I need to do it on my own.
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Comments3

  • Hopey_xx

    Nice poem, follow your heart.

    • WG7

      Thanks Hopey.

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      Great poem WG7 ~ the Ups and Downs of LOVE ! Sometime when i have had no regular GF (it happens) the TWO come along at once. I generally end up with one as Girl who is just a Friend and the other as a "hands on" Girl Friend. 14 is a bit young so the one of 17 seems more appropriate. Also as my POEM says the SUN is hotter than the MOON (just joking !) Every Blessing and as Hopey says "Just follow your heart !" Thanks for sharing ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN.

      • WG7

        The thing is I am 14...And we dated before...plus I've dated a 17 year old before (not the same person). Also thanks this means a lot and I'm glad you commented. Hugs

      • Augustus

        Liked the comparison to,the moon and the sun. You exposed your vulnerability here. Perhaps that's something to explore a little more. You can search deep without a knife. It may be a bit more painful however. This was very thoughtful.

        • WG7

          Thanks agustus this is very thoughtful. This help a lot, and I truly appreciate this.



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