We talked about the stupidest things
I told you that I sing
You asked how many bfs I had
When I told you. You seemed sad
I laughed the whole time
I didn't feel like I committed a crime
You told me that you won't go to bed until I tell you
I told you no so boo hoo
I felt safe and I didn't feel apart
And then it came down to my heart
It's him but it's also the other one
One was born from the sun and the other the moon
They both make me smile and laugh like no other
Only one knows about my brother
One wants to gain my trust
The other thinks it's not a must
I know I have to do this on my own
All on my lone
Though it's hard to comprehend
Though either way I have to chose one in the end
Sun, moon...brightness, darkness...
If I choose him than the other I'll miss
My friend told me to stay away from the moon
She said he's gone it's to soon
The sun makes me feel like smiling all day
I just talked and talked and lay
Though you need both the moon and sun to have life
Only the moon knows I've used the knife
The sun hardly knows me, but he wants to know
They are both my foe
I've lived knowning the moon for so long
But now wanting the sun...Is it wrong
My life got turned around
They both want to be bound
The sun and I both love BVB
Though he seems a little creepy
The moon and I both love SH and anime
He knows my birthday's in may
I don't know what to do
If I pick the sun what will happen to my crew
I want the answer and I hope to find one
Will it be in the moon or sun
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WolfIsControlledByTheDemons (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: It's about two guys I like. I don't know what to do. The sun is 17 and the moon is 14. They are both my friends. I just wish someone can explain it to me. Though I know I need to do it on my own.
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Nice poem, follow your heart.
Thanks Hopey.
Great poem WG7 ~ the Ups and Downs of LOVE ! Sometime when i have had no regular GF (it happens) the TWO come along at once. I generally end up with one as Girl who is just a Friend and the other as a "hands on" Girl Friend. 14 is a bit young so the one of 17 seems more appropriate. Also as my POEM says the SUN is hotter than the MOON (just joking !) Every Blessing and as Hopey says "Just follow your heart !" Thanks for sharing ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN.
The thing is I am 14...And we dated before...plus I've dated a 17 year old before (not the same person). Also thanks this means a lot and I'm glad you commented. Hugs
Liked the comparison to,the moon and the sun. You exposed your vulnerability here. Perhaps that's something to explore a little more. You can search deep without a knife. It may be a bit more painful however. This was very thoughtful.
Thanks agustus this is very thoughtful. This help a lot, and I truly appreciate this.
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