Hips and Ribs

SheWasTheSun

Hips and ribs

Guts and gore

Let me in

Feed me more

Legs so lean

Heart so loud

Talk so mean

Make me proud

Clocks that tick

Thoughts that scream

Words that trick

You’re on my team

Live for light

Die for laughter

Sleep at night

I'll be there after

Hips and ribs

Guts and gore

You can’t strip

I’m at your core

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Comments +

JJCooke March 13th, 2017 16:52
Dark and lovely. Good read
- SheWasTheSunMarch 13th, 2017 17:08
  Thank you! Glad you enjoyed!
Tony36 March 13th, 2017 17:04
Great write
- SheWasTheSunMarch 13th, 2017 17:08
  Thank you! 🙂
- Tony36March 13th, 2017 17:26
  Welcome
Goldfinch60 March 14th, 2017 01:44
Good write.
- SheWasTheSunMarch 14th, 2017 02:15
  Thank you so much!
Garry April 2nd, 2017 03:02
Powerful and dark. I enjoyed this.
- SheWasTheSunApril 2nd, 2017 13:43
  Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed!
swingline May 20th, 2017 20:07
A titillating poem full of tease and exasperation . Well done .
- SheWasTheSunMay 21st, 2017 01:01
  Thank you very much!

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