You Surrender

gelyn

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For so many times I acted unwisely
You didn't see it tearing me softly
I thought no one could ever rule me
But look, I surrender so Quickly

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Telling me you love me brings me hope
It's your heart, that I'm wishing for
Even that you don't love me anymore
I'll never stop loving you mi amor.

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When the time comes I feel our love come crashing down
I'll just hold you tighter, closer in my arms
But when it's time for you to say It's over
I'll say "OK" I love you, but you surrender.

 

 

Author's note:

All of my compositions are labor of love, hurt, and pain..
Originally made from my own Experiences.
A copyright not a copycat.

Gel

  • Author: Gelyn Guinto Rodriguez (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 13th, 2017 18:48
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 20
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  • Tweebtaztic

    This is so bittersweet

  • Goldfinch60

    Good motive write.



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