I told you I was hurt
Abandoned​ and afraid
Dying from an inescapable pain
I told you it was horrible
You didn't bat an eye
You did nothing
I told you life is worthless
It's just a stupid game
That apathy was soon to be all that remained
I told you I was sorry
You didn't seem to mind
You did nothing
I told you goodbye in my note
The pills will end the pain
Maybe you'll miss me when I'm gone
I laughed at the thought
You didn't care about me
You did nothing
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Author:
Naeners (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I uploaded this before but I wasn't completely happy with it I rewrote a few bits and I think it's better now. I'm working on writing from another's prospective and I think this is good. Please tell me what you think. Constructive criticism is always welcomed.
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Comments1
Sometimes others just stand by watching on as someone gets hurt, most people are good though and will offer help. Good emotive write.
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