I need to hurry
I need to run
I'm at the edge
Of a loaded gun
What then
seemed fine
But
I'm running out of time
A quick fix would be nice
But life ain't that easy
if life were like that
There'd be more people breathing
A handful of pills
A sharp blade, a knife
We all know the drill
But only some thrive
A piece of scrap metal
Can be all you balance on
when its pointed at your head
One move, and you're gone
Comments2
You have plenty of time to come through this and be happy. Good emotive write.
This was one of my favorites of yours because I relate to it so much, your a very good poet and If you ever need to talk with someone actually your age, don't be scared to message me. Well, till next time friend.
Your friend - Hannah/VI
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