When I wake up in the Morning
Beam of sun falls in my room
When I leave home, upon every movement in my life
I see you my universe
You are the galaxy
With stars, moons and planets
You are the sphere
Where all rotate to get its Day & Night
You kept me safer. To see me grow
You gave me light, to see my life
You gave me Breath, to feel my life
You gave me a place in you, to dost with
You protected me from Wind
You protected me from drought
You protected me from rain
From every seasons that pass
To start, to pledge, to please
No words to mention your Pain.
You cried, died & Smiled
To see me on this earth
I want to see my universe smile
With endless ripple in heart
I love you my mom
You’re my universe
By Rijaz Rafi
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- Comment from author about the poem: First of all this a poem dedicated to all mothers in the world. this poem describes symbolic love of mother from the time she keeps her child in the womb to the time he starts going out of home in his own. this poem describes the strain that every mother undergoes in protection and and birth of the child\\\\r\\\\nstrongest lines in the poem ..\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\" you cried, died and smiled\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\" \\\\r\\\\n\\\\r\\\\n
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WELCOME RIJAZ ~ Thanks for an elegant first poem ~ with an awesome topic ~ MOMS ! You have descibed very aptly the love ~ concern ~ joy and protection our MOMS have for us 24/7 all day and every day. I too have the BEST MOM in the World ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK). Please check my poems ~ thanks B.
Sure Brian i will, thanks appreciating your comments ...Thanks
This is a wonderful poem, thank you for posting it! There's a deep-set and heartfelt feeling to it that is inescapable; a thank you to mothers everywhere, for all they do, I love it.
Thanks Zarhgon , appriciate your comments , mothers spent their entire life sacrificing their personal events because of us, today how many in the wold are living with mother i primary motive is to bring people closer to their parents
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