your beauty astounds me
you could be doing the simplest thing
but your smile still lights up the room
you smile to yourself when you think nobody is looking
yet everyone notices, because you are very hard to ignore
you distract me from my real life and lead me to a fantasy world
where I am not afraid of you catch me staring
I love the feeling I get when I see you smile
its like a giant wave of perfection rushes past me
and of course you have flaws,
but no matter how hard I try,
I can't see past every wonderful thing you, there's simply too much
when you blush, red paints across your face
I can't stop staring at you.
I can't stop thinking about you and your smile
when I'm having one of the worst,
your smile takes away the pain, it makes me forget
I should be ashamed, but sometimes I'm not
I don't want to stop feeling the way I do for you,
and still you are unaware of this,
even when it is obvious
even though your words hurt and I loose confidence,
I still love you, again and again
it feels insane even writing this, since I can't even put "I love you" into words
jesus, and your eyes, I almost forgot to mention your eyes
Just looking at you takes my breath away
and makes my heart skip a beat
since this is already very long, and you are probably tired of reading my poem,
I'm just going to sum it up and say,
I really love you, but you don't love me back.
and if you do, it's only because you have to. I guess it's sort of mandatory to love your friends right?
I love the way you look at me, and I don't ever want it to stop.
I'm sorry this is coming out fast, and in a poem I don't even know if you'll like,
I just wanted to explain to you why someone would "love you", like I do,
by saying that I love with with all my heart and my entire being and no matter how much you break me, my love for you will forever remain the same.
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Author:
Izzy (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: March 29th, 2017 09:09
- Comment from author about the poem: "You" actually told me this poem I made was beautiful. This was the first poem I ever felt proud about, and is one of my favorites that I've done.
- Category: Letter
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THANKS ANGEL ~ FOR A REALLY BEAUTIFUL POEM ~ In both its structure and subject. We all (from time to time) experience a love for someone ~ and it is not really reciprocated ~ we call it UNREQUITED LOVE ! Perhaps its a forbidden or unapproved Love and that makes the pain even worse ~ but sometimes even better ! ? I empathise with you ~ Every Blessing in your search for True Love ~ Thanks for sharing ~ Love & Hugs ~ BRIAN
THANK YOU SO MUCH! You're so sweet <3
Nice tribute to unrequited love I've felt this way also to have no reciprocation very relatable
Much sympathy to you! Glad we have something in common!
your poem is wonderful and lovely~ feelings from the heart put on paper make for great poetry. write on ! WW
thank you, love<3 xo
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