It is a hard truth
I haven't held my father
Since time had begun
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Author:
brandon k f (
Offline) - Published: April 3rd, 2017 10:43
- Category: Haiku
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It is a hard truth
I haven't held my father
Since time had begun
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Comments4
Very good.
Good haiku.
Great write
Very good emotive write but it is more a senryu than a haiku.
The origins of both say that a haiku should be of nature and the seasons where a senryu is for emotions.
I apologise if I am being pedantic.
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