I love her so
She's perfect bliss
The smile she shares
Her lovely kiss
When I feel down
She makes it better
I hold her tight
I have to ask her
"Will you hug me close?
Will you keep me safe?
Will you make the world okay?
When life goes wrong, or I'm feeling blue, will you grab my hand, and pull me through?"
She loves me so
I can't see why
She says it's how
I make her fly
When she feels down
I make it better
She holds me tight
And so I tell her
"I will hug you close.
I will keep you safe.
I will make the world okay.
When life goes wrong, or your feeling blue, I will grab your hand, and pull you through."
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Author:
Naeners (
Offline) - Published: April 4th, 2017 19:32
- Comment from author about the poem: Sorry if this is horrible. I've never been in love but I really want to be able to write a good love poem so I try my best to get into character. Please tell me what you think. Constructive criticism is always welcomed.
- Category: Love
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Comments2
you seem to get better with each poem. write on ww
Thanks so much 🙂
Good write and good layout.
Thank you 🙂
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