That day is not today

Marianne

One day I won't feel you

One day I won't see you

One day I won't cry

One day I won't miss you

One day I won't need you

One day I won't love you

Today

I miss you

I need you

I love you

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willyweed April 10th, 2017 11:46
loss is a sad thing to bare
nice poem
- MarianneApril 10th, 2017 12:32
  It is. Thankyou
down the rabbithole April 10th, 2017 12:55
This made me feel emotion and in touch with my own sadness. Therefore the poem has done what poems should do I believe... reach within the reader
- MarianneApril 10th, 2017 13:07
  Thankyou I do believe the same I'm glad my work can also be in touch with others x
P.H.Rose April 10th, 2017 15:34
Very good marianne
I like those repeated
Type poems...
Has a really nice
Structure to it.
Well done...
- MarianneApril 11th, 2017 01:22
  Thankyou. Something totally different for me x
Garry April 10th, 2017 15:50
Nicely done.
- MarianneApril 11th, 2017 01:22
  Thankyou x
Goldfinch60 April 11th, 2017 01:04
Beautiful emotive write.
- MarianneApril 11th, 2017 01:22
  Thankyou x

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