If You Go
If you go
I’ll go with you
When you go
I’ll go too
Wherever you go
I’ll go with you
My life is yours
It no longer belongs to me
You took it from me
The day you were born
I cannot live without you
So whenever, wherever you go
I’ll go with you
If you go
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Author:
nancy akbari (
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- Comment from author about the poem: For some reason this poem makes me sad. When I see its title in my list of poems, I get sad, just reading the title.
- Category: Love
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WELCOME ~ NANCY ~ thanks for your first poem ~ very sentimental. To me it sounds like MOM ~ who been devoted to her CHILD ever since it was born ? The key line for me is: "My life is yours # It no longer belongs to me # You took it from me # The day you were born. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
Thank you Brian. I do also think it is my devotion to my children and my feeling of being unloved by them, now that they are grown. However, in fact I am very loved by them and many other people. So you see it is my own problem within, not objectively true. Anyway........I will surely check out your poems.
There came a DAY ~ NANCY ~ when we all had to fly the nest and it is a big wrench when we do ! Thanks BRIAN (UK)
if you go,i will follow,sounds like a poem of love
Hi Wordman. Thanks for your comment. I did categorize it under love.
but i can feel the love in it
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