Crying is the best way to be happy
Sometimes crying also makes you sleepy
Don’t be shy to cry and be a weepy
“Ohh.. Please stop crying honey “said pappy
All the ghosts will come here and it’s creepy
Crying at night is the worst idea
If you don’t stop, you will feel nausea
They will think that you invite them to come
They will eat your thumb make you numb and dumb.
And this is a stupid superstition.
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Author:
Ana Maria Mamoribo (
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- Comment from author about the poem: "Don't cry at night" is one of indonesian superstitions. When i was young, i believe in this superstition. If i cry at night, my parents will come and tell me stop crying because the ghost will come to my house. I'm just a beginner and my english is not really good.
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Aww! What a wonderful poem written by a gorgeous girl! You are doing great!
hahha, mkasih nene. Sa tra terllu mengerti apa yg pace2 diatas ni dong blng!
ahahahaha 😀
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WELCOME ANA ~ Thanks for your first very ethnic poem. It is good to read about the customs and superstitions (we all have them) of other Nations. In the UK we do a lot of crying alone at night ~ it's more private that way. BUT ~ if I ever come to Indonesia ~ I'll remember not to ! Yours BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
Thank you Brian, i'm so glad that some people want to read my first poem. Indonesia is a place that full of superstition. I will check your poems.
Love it, great write
Thank you very much!
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