Likes control your life
Comments control your ego
Your hand controls the knife
Your head just wants to let go
Messages destroy you
You fall for fake friends lies
They dont realise these things hurt you
Until again, another dies
You think you cant escape it,
the pain you have inside
You cover your skin that is slit
There is much more that you hide
The therapy does not help
Everythings your own thoughts
When they get involved you want to welp
and hide until your own body rots
They all say that they care
You watch everyone lie
They cant see that you easily tear
and all you want to do is die
You lie in your room all alone
Help me you say
No more messages on your phone
There depressed and hopeless you lay
You run baths at cold as ice
You feel your tears as hot as flames
There is a list of who was nice
There are not many names
The blade you holds as sharp as glass
You feel it stroke your thigh
A room filled with toxic gas
You're so scared to goodbye
Bravely and slowly letting go
You take a big step off the side
What caused this horrific sorrow?
A bitch that's known as suicide.
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Author:
sarahlouisegreenn (
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Well written and expressed great write
thanks tony
Welcome
WELCOME SARAH ~ Thanks for you an excellent first poem ~ but with a very scary message ~ SUICIDE. In 2014 there were 6100 suicides in the UK (4600 Men & 1500 Ladies) and on of the min causes was depression. Many of us can relate to the details in your poem ~ BUT ~ we have survived. When I count my blessings ~ I realise that i am much better off than many people in the World of my age. On 11th May you will be another year older and another year wiser ~ SO put you knife away 'til your BIRTHDAY and think again ! Thinking of you ~ Praying for you ~ BRIAN (UK) lease check my poems ~ Thanks B
thanks brian haha, i appreciate your message
real stuff i like that
thank you
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