Thrive as beautiful.
Blossom so dangerously,
rot so lifelessly.
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Author:
Lucy (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem represents the sadness that I feel when my roses die for the winter. They symbolize my summer, freedom and happiness. I tend to look at them while doing my homework if they are in blossom and it just adds a little color to even my worst days. Sorry I'm not very good at poetry and this is my first poem. Feedback is great!
- Category: Haiku
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Comments3
A very good haiku. Well done. Paints a vivid image
Good one and welcome! ww
A super one - wish it were one of mine.
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