You Were My..

You were my calm ocean and now you're my tsunami.

Damaging and fatal, 

Taking life from me.

You were my grassy meadow and now you're my battle ground.

Murderous and angry, 

A gunshot sound

You were my clear blue skies and now you're my severe storms.

Loud and dangerous, 

Takes on many forms.

You were my party cruise and now you're my shipwreck. 

Violent and scary, 

Thrown off the deck.


  • Garry

    Short and strong. Enjoyed it!

  • Goldfinch60

    Good emotive write.

  • AAA

    strong write, Emotions well expressed! i love it

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