Treasured.
I remember that day,
a grainy twilight draining sky's colour,
strange iridescent skin
on the water and wind lifting my hair.
I remember the burst
of birds into flight from silhouette trees,
limestone luminescence
and the damp of rocks cooling my feet.
I remember the peace
as I waited for you and our rendezvous,
nervous, yet love grew
memories never so treasured as then.
- Author: Fay Slimm. ( Offline)
- Published: April 25th, 2017 04:25
- Category: Love
- Views: 19
Comments4
Good loving write
Beautiful Fay.
Sublime elegant wording here, poetically rendered wow. I tink I have read u before. Kudos for this word art expressions.
U r most welcome to review my latest poem too. Pleeez do. I
Water and light lift air that we remember. With grainy twilight we remember the day. From nervousness love grows slowly to find light of treasured memories. A beautifully narrated poem is shared here.
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