I still
recall
how we first met
Catz JCR
1984
crowded bar
eyes met
love at first sight?
Not quite
Though
there was
much liking
me to to you
one way
I had nothing
you wanted
you had
dark hair
crooked smile
and
dancing eyes to die for
We talked
you laughed
I grumbled
Your friend
bought me a pint.
I was sad
it wasn't you.
We drank
you left
I drank some more
and went
to bed.
Alone
Months later
in a punt
random chance
beer picnic
botle opener?
No chance.
Punt side cap removal
I taught you.
You tried it
hurt your finger.
I was sad
you were happy
bandaged hand
essay excuse.
We fell in love
your crooked smile
and
dancing eyes to die for
My car
and hairy shoulders
Years later
you still
have crooked smile
and
dancing eyes to die for
now own own car
I have
....
hairy back and you
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Author:
Garry (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: April 25th, 2017 08:23
- Comment from author about the poem: Exactly how I met my wife. She didn't much like me when we first met. I have a thing for eyes, what more can I say
- Category: Love
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Comments6
Good write, may your love vest be always filled with love and joy.
Lovely memories Gary and so romantically written she will treasure this recall of how two fell in love. Great read.
So very nice Garry.
Thank you. Only wrote it yesterday so still needs some fettling
Engaging style, realistic yet poetic. Eyes eh. Interesting real life love story. Kudos.
U r most welcome to review my latest poem too. Pleeez do.
Thank you.
You can feel the reminiscence in this one. I like that.
Thank you.
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