My Path, So Far

felio123

I play in the darkness 

From there I can see where it gets darker 

Or so I believe 

I haven't played there yet 

People, all of most people 

claim it's dark 

claim it's bad 

claim I get it from my dad 

what sense do I make 

of the path I take 

I feel as if it's been laid out for me 

even a path that hasn't been clearly formed 

is one that has been left to you 

So walk it 

take the path 

or don't 

it still had to be walked 

Move forward 

Just move 

Create, A, Thee, Your

PATH.....................

 

 

 

  • Author: felio123 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 29th, 2017 03:35
  • Comment from author about the poem: I've written poems before when I was a kid and really deep in my feelings to myself, now that I am older I feel as if I rather share my words at the moment I feel and write them
  • Category: Reflection
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME FELIO ~ Thanks for your first poem which will make us all think ~ QUO VADIS ~ "Where am I going and why ?" We are all on an individual "Journey through Life" and our PATH is conditioned (to some extent) by where we start from (geographically and economically and genetically etc) Nature (DNA) and Nurture (Society). Despite what the US Constitution says "We are all born very UNEQUAL !) Which is why some die before they reach ONE and other now life to be 100+ have many offspring and achieve great things while on Earth etc. In retrospect big & small decisions we make every day set our PATH and determine our FUTURE. Each of us has to ensure that most of these decisions (Big & Small) are the right ones ~ AMEN. Thanks please check my poems ~ BRIAN (UK).

    • felio123

      Wow thank you for the comment means a lot to me

      • felio123

      • Warded Seabee

        Great write

        • felio123

          Much appreciated

        • orchidee

          A fine write.

          • felio123

            Thank you I'm glad you think so



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