I play in the darkness
From there I can see where it gets darker
Or so I believe
I haven't played there yet
People, all of most people
claim it's dark
claim it's bad
claim I get it from my dad
what sense do I make
of the path I take
I feel as if it's been laid out for me
even a path that hasn't been clearly formed
is one that has been left to you
So walk it
take the path
or don't
it still had to be walked
Move forward
Just move
Create, A, Thee, Your
PATH.....................
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Author:
felio123 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I've written poems before when I was a kid and really deep in my feelings to myself, now that I am older I feel as if I rather share my words at the moment I feel and write them
- Category: Reflection
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WELCOME FELIO ~ Thanks for your first poem which will make us all think ~ QUO VADIS ~ "Where am I going and why ?" We are all on an individual "Journey through Life" and our PATH is conditioned (to some extent) by where we start from (geographically and economically and genetically etc) Nature (DNA) and Nurture (Society). Despite what the US Constitution says "We are all born very UNEQUAL !) Which is why some die before they reach ONE and other now life to be 100+ have many offspring and achieve great things while on Earth etc. In retrospect big & small decisions we make every day set our PATH and determine our FUTURE. Each of us has to ensure that most of these decisions (Big & Small) are the right ones ~ AMEN. Thanks please check my poems ~ BRIAN (UK).
Wow thank you for the comment means a lot to me
Great write
Much appreciated
A fine write.
Thank you I'm glad you think so
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