Darkness, inside my head
Blinded from reality, Nightmares during the day
Always distraught, it wont stop 'til im dead
Darkness, my puppeteer
The overpowering voice that pulls all of the strings
How can i be normal when im thinking these things
Darkness, i am your slave
Full of self hatred
Thanks to you, ive dug my grave.
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Author:
xchidori (
Offline) - Published: May 3rd, 2017 04:45
- Comment from author about the poem: I havent written poetry in about 4 years, tell me what you think
- Category: Sad
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Comments3
Good write as a poem. I thought it was going to be about the loss of a person or pet, with that title. I'm not keen on darker poems myself - that's just me!
I don't go along with those who say there must be darkness, so that the light may show up. Unless one calls darkness a 'necessary evil'. But then that excuses evil. I will stop now, before I get me self in a big tangle here!
Ohh you lost me again. I dunno if I'm on foot or horse-back; whether it's day or night; light or dark! heehee.
Ahhh so I'm OK if I dunno if I'm going backwards or forwards - for example?! And why am I taking up space on another person's poem? oohh!
Only in the darkness can stars shine their brightest.
Darkness is always there but so is light, just look up and see the moon and stars to see the light. Good write.
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