Loveing you is easy missing you is harder
because when I'm busy or when I'm not you are always on my mind
in the middle of the day or last thing at night I'm always thinking of you
your eyes are as blue as the sky on a summer's day
your skin is as soft as candy floss
this is for you to say I love you
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Author:
karla (
Offline) - Published: May 4th, 2017 15:03
- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is about my other half because we don't life together and we go weeks with out seeing each other
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WELCOME ~ Thanks KARLA ~ For a very beautiful Love Poem ! I know from experience that absence does indeed make the Heart grow Fonder ! You will find MPS is a nice welcoming site ! Please check my Poems ~ Thanks BRIAN (UK)
Thank you so much as you can tell it's my first time so all new to me at min I'm very glad you liked my poem
Thanks KARLA ~ We all have to start somewhere ! If you check my poems you will see they are set out in discrete lines and verses. That i how Poems are usually presented on MPS ~ rather than continuous prose. Poems don't have to rhyme but it is better if they scan ~ lines with an equal number of syllable. This is not a criticism ~ it is an observation and a suggestion ~ OK ! Yours BRIAN
When two become one and then devided again the two haves will crave the whole .
Line separation would've just topped this off, but by no means takes anything away without it. It's lovely and really nice to share your feelings and thoughts in this way.
Thank you for all the lovely comment
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