As my eyes close and my mind drifts away
Images of you appear at the foot of my bed
Peeling away your clothes, the layers fall to the floor
You draw near, my heart races with every advancement
Finally you make contact with my skin
Your eyes preditory and I'm willing to be devoured
When your lips trail to mine the awaited taste is sweet
My hands find their way tugging gently at your hair
Pulling you closer into each kiss
My hips rise as you remove any obstacle
I'm warm, waiting, and wet
You tease me, your essence all over me
Every part of me shivers in full bliss
My toes curl and I grasp at anything near
My desire to have you can't be held back any longer
Pleading, I beg you to end my devine suffering
You comply with a devilish grin as you claim your prize
Hands wrapped around my waist you penetrate me
With every thrust exhilaration intensifies
Your hands cup my face and you take my breath away
The sound of delightful satisfaction escapes my lips
Closer and closer we approach our pleasurable limit
With a final push we are expelled into euphoria
Bodies melded together, intertwined in ecstasy
My eyes open, my arms stretch, a lovely way to wake up and start a new day
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Author:
Mandi (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Sometimes I write inappropriate things. Sorry not sorry😘
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100 years ago it would have been banned in Boston . Sweet dreams are made of this . Who am I to disagree ?
Good thing it's now than😉
"Say 69 and kiss me ~ Hold m tight and tell me you miss me ~ I love you wherever you be ~ dream a little DREAM of ME ! Thanks MANDI ~ When we are apart from our LOVER we all dream of making love ~ and (in context) this a very beautiful Poem to wake up to ! Thanks for caring & sharing ~ HUGS ~ BRIAN
Glad you liked it 😊
I really like the structure and imagery of this poem. Well done! I do however think there's more to be said about this.I think this could be a world - class poem with a bit of tweaking. Just my opinion, anyway, congratulations!
Thank you. I thought it needed a little more too but i didn't want to end up turning it vulgar or become repetitious. Maybe I'll look back and see what i can tweak later with a fresh mind. It is only a first draft after all. Thank you for your comment 😉
I like the way you expressed simple acts in words
Thank you
Good write
Thank you
Welcome
I added a few lines...hope it didn't ruin it😅
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