You're the light shining between the clouds.
Everything was dark but you were bright and clear.
I knew you were who I needed.
You felt right.
I can't express with words how you make me feel.
But if I had to try.
I would say that
You make me feel like the sun.
Time pauses in our steps when we kiss but the world keeps playing in slow motion.
I want to kiss you forever.
You make me feel safe.
Like nothing in the rest of the world will touch us when we kiss.
I need you to make me feel that way forever.
I can't imagine not making time stop with you.
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Author:
karmavervain (
Offline) - Published: May 12th, 2017 00:55
- Category: Love
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WELCOME KARMA ~ Thanks you for a very beautiful first Poem. The sensation of being in LOVE with someone who LOVES you in return is beyond words to describe ! But you have described it perfectly ~ It makes me feel like the SUN too ~ so warm and so bright ! Thank for sharing ~ BRIAN (UK). Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
Welcome to the site! Good first poem! Try to place some more imagery in your next poem! Make sure to make some friends! 🙂
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