Unsuccessful
All hope has gone, a life now lost.
Energy and confidence destroyed. Where possibilities had flourished.
Now a broken dream remains.
This could of be so very different.
Had the outcome followed a path.
To be one step from its summit.
For then so very far to fall.
This day it started brightly.
And then all at once went black.
As if all light in an instance gone.
Never to return this day.
Wander now,no compass followed
I am Lost on stone laden ground.
Boredom
A day so long no end to reach
Hours to stack before it's end
weight heavy across my chest
Difficult an attempt to breath
Every seven seems as the last
No change in this my circle time
I scream so loud it splits my ear
But non can hear, nor non can see
To them the day seems normal
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Author:
P.H.Rose (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: May 14th, 2017 18:12
- Comment from author about the poem: Feeling a bit grey today Writing is reflecting Missing the sun, sea And seductive sights. Bit of cold turkey after A holiday.......
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I'll be away next month and wondering if its worth going - aw heck yes I'll risk it. Great piece - hope you cheer up soon - the summers coming.
Thank you Michael
It's always worth it
And as in the words
Of Star Trek
"To explore strange
New worlds.
To seek out new life and
New Civilisations, to boldly
Go where no man
Has been before"..
Ok a bit ott but you
Know what I mean..
It can be the toughest thing, P.H. having to return to the grind after having such a great break in routine! Great work expressing the agnst of each situation!
Thank you WBL...
I feel pretty great
Today.. The cloud has
Passed.... The familiarity
Of my home helps...
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