I say I'll quit
After one more
And so I smoke
My last cigarette
I say I'm quitting
But I'm really not
I tried so hard
The smoke is killing me
But the stress
Is killing me faster
I don't think I'll live
To be Twenty one
Someone save me
Before I die
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Author:
Sora (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This is a note to those who still have a chance to quit and for those who haven't started yet Don't smoke there are better ways to release stress smoking isn't cool
- Category: Letter
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Comments4
Good write. it's easy to say 'if we put our hand in the fire, it will get burnt'. Smoking is not exactly the same as that. No use me being a wag, and saying: 'I gave up smoking; I never started'!
maybe if you can literally turn you hand to something else, when you (your hand!0 reaches for another ciggy?
Have a really good try. You're only 15. There's all the rest of your life to live yet! 🙂
Giving up smoking is not easy, I was a heavy smoker but even I manged to give up and that was 35 years ago. Giving up makes so much sense, you are only 15 and have your life in front of you, mine is behind me and I am so glad that I gave up smoking in my thirties.
i've been trying to quit but its hard i know the smoke is killing me and with my asma i won't live to 20 if i keep smoking
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