cosmicbliss

A New Home


I made a home out of you
You felt very welcoming at first
Kept me warm and content
I didn't know sadness with you

I made a home out of you
And I think I've overstayed
the warmth suddenly was
starting to fade away
and you started to make blue

I stopped making a home out of you
It wasn't the same
you were yours
and I'm starting to realize that people don't exist
to keep me from feeling alone.
So I guess I'll try and be my own home.

Comments3

  • OUTBACK

    EXCELENT POETIC* [ REALIZATIONAL ]* POST ! YOU* ARE YOUR OWN HOME !

    • cosmicbliss

      Thank you!

      • OUTBACK

        THE BEST WAY* TO FLY !

      • BRIANSODES

        Thanks for sharing BLISS ~ As we grow up we have a home of our own ~ which we like to share (on & off) with a Partner. I have Flat "My Own Home" but without a Partner it can be lonely ~ but I need to make the right choice ! That is the dilemma of your lovely poem ! To share or not to share ~ That is the QUESTION ! Thanks for caring ~ Love to be your first MPS Friend ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems & Fusions ~ Thanks B.

        • cosmicbliss

          Thanks for sharing your lovely comment and for liking!

        • beautifulmindshidedeeppain

          Love this



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