Queen_Of_Darkness

Like a cigarette

I saw you again today
And just like that
All these feelings came rushing back
Spreading like wildfire
Burning me inside and out
Your just like a cigarette
Burning my lungs
God you make it hard to breath
Maybe one day you will see
That your slowly killing Me

Comments4

  • swingline

    The eyes get lock jaw , can't but help to gaze . As slow burning fire inside has turned into a blaze . Oh what you plan to do , lip to lip , face to face .

  • BRIANSODES

    WELCOME QUEEN ~ Thanks for your first poem ! As we move through and out of our Teens ~ most of us (YIN & YANG) experience "unrequited love" and it does hurt and it does burn ! We can empathise and in my experience ~ the only thing that compensates ~ is to find a New Love and move on ~ BUT the memories of what might have been still hurts ! Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B.

    • Queen_Of_Darkness

      Thank you for your comment 💗 and since than I have moved on and found a new love. I will make sure to check out your poems - Ari USA

    • kathyhall

      Very well worded. Great job!

    • Damaged Soul/Kindred Spirit

      Hang in there Queen.



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