IT FEELS TOO BAD TO BE TRUE, IS IT ALL REALLY COMING FROM YOU.
DO YOU REALLY HEAR ME,OR IS IT THE THE MISTAKE YOU LET BE.
IS IT THAT I HAVEN'T LOST AS MUCH AS YOU, OR IS IT THAT YOUR BRAIN HAS YOU MISCONSTRUE.
SHOULD WE REALLY CHANGE OUR LIVES FOR EACH OTHER, OR JUST LET THIS ALL UNCOVER.
ONE SIDED BLAME WHAT THE FUCK, JUST MY LUCK, JUST TRY BEING IN MY SHOES AND SEE HOW MUCH IT SUCK.
ALWAYS ME RIGHT, BUT AT THE END OF NIGHT I'M THE ONE WHO CANT SLEEP TIGHT, WHAT A SIGHT THAT I FIGHT FOR YOU BUT I'M STILL WRONG, AND HAVE TO STAY STRONG.
WHY HAVE YOU LET IT BE TAKEN,LET THE DEVIL BREAK IN, GOT US SHAKEN, AND NOT BE AWAKEN TO WHAT WE WERE,NOW IT'S ALL A BLUR ,AND NOW IT CAN'T BE CLEANED,WHEN WE WERE SUPPOSED TO BE TEAMED.
THIS LIFE WE WERE TRYING TO MAKE FOR US, HAS NOTHING ELSE TO DISCUSS. CAN'T FIX A DISASTER, WITH TIME GOING FASTER.
I SPENT A LOT OF TIME TRYING TO FIX ME FOR YOU,BUT YOU CAN'T SEE ALL I WENT THROUGH.
BUT MEAN WHILE HELPING YOU PUT YOURSELF TOGETHER, I'VE LET MY PROGRESS GO AWAY AS THE WIND BLOWS A FEATHER .
EACH MISTAKE I HAVE MADE ,HAS MADE ITS WAY BACK TO ME THROUGH YOU AND CUTS LIKE A BLADE. SHIT HURTS BAD, BUT YOUR BANDAGE IS JUST A FAD.
HEALING STARTS WITH ME EVEN IF I HAVE TO BE CAREFREE AND FLEE.
I HAVE QUESTIONS, AM I SUPPOSED TO PAY FOR EVERYONE TRANSGRESSIONS?
CAN I GET THE LOVE DESERVE ,OR WILL I JUST BE SOMETHING YOU SWERVE ?
WILL THE THINGS I HAVE TRIED TO ACHIEVE GET ME TREATED LIKE A QUEEN OR JUST MAKE A WORSE SCENE?
I DON'T KNOW MAYBE EVERYTHING CUTS LIKE A KNIFE WITH A MIS-TAKEN LIFE.
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ShayfullyTalented1 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is meant to show the division of a relationship because one is the blame for everything that happens and with their life already not starting off as the best because of mistakes that were made, being the blame now doesnt help. So this person feels like their life together is being taken away because of ones past hence mis-taken life !
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GOOD MORNING FRIEND ~ Thanks for you first poem which is very powerful and positive ! I LIKE PEOPLE WHO POST IN CAPITALS ~ MEANS YOU WANT US TO LISTEN ! Who you so angry at ? Some MAN (we are usually to blame !) ~ Yourself ~ or maybe GOD ? We all find ourselves in situations we don't want to be in ~ even when we do our best to stay on top of things ! We can do only do our beat and if we do we should be treated like a QUEEN (or in my case a KING) but alas we don't always get the rewards we deserve. I trust things will improve ~ thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
Thankyou so much your feedback....thay really means alot ...but i went off of a woman's point of view of a bad relationshio in general....I've seen so many woman go through that situation ...so it inspired me to write that poem
THANKS ~ FRIEND Oh Dear ~ when will we really learn to treat our Ladies like QUEENS which is what you all deserve ! My MOM (and my Sister !) taught me to treat all Ladies as ANGELS and give them lots of TLC (tender loving care) which is what I always try to do ! I have visited MICHIGAN ~ Lovely State with all that shoreline ~ It's nearly 70F in the South of England this week how is your weather ? Every Blessing ~ BRIAN
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