I am naked

amateur poet

I am naked,

I lie underneath the man I love and I am naked,

As he looks down on me all I see is the eyes of a stranger,

As he looks down on me I feel naked,

I feel afraid,

In my head is every thought, none of them clean none of them pure,

Realisation floods through me of disgust and guilt,

The man above I thought I knew,

Sickness fills me as I try to break free,

For a moment everything stops,

All is still, my mind is empty,

I am empty,

I lie there, and all I feel is naked.

  • Author: Amateur poet (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 23rd, 2017 08:08
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 91
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first POEM ~ full of mystery ? Who is the lucky Man and why do you love him. I love the SUSPENSE ! Yours BRIAN Please check my poems ~ Thanks B

    • amateur poet

      It was actually the moment I realised I didn't love him, but thanks for the feedback

      • BRIAN & ANGELA

        WOW FRIEND ~ You do choose your moments ! Thanks for explanation ~ Yours BRIAN

      • orchidee

        Oohh get a nice warm cardy on then! heehee. A fine write.

      • J.thewriter

        Love can be a devastating trick sometimes. Beautifully written!

      • ron parrish aka wordman

        sometimes it takes time to realize that we don`t know a person



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