An unexpected guest of happiness
World's maximum softness
Forced my heart into kindness
Now everything become flawless
Every girl has unique attraction
But she steals my entire distraction
All my thought faced contraction
My vision made a revolution
Is there any permanent solution?
Never saw the reason for connection
That shows the true affection
I am in the position
To make a relation
Any pray its not a fiction.
Comments8
Great flow to poem, love the theme to it
Thanks shannon for reading my poem and supporting me
Love is like walking down a razor blade . It takes a lot of concentration to keep from falling and getting cut deeply .
Correctly said line...we must be very careful in choosing our words with lovable ones
Very very nice, you are talented
Thanks beu..You are one encouraging person
This was the first one I written long ago..Thanks kathy for reading my poem
Well written and an enjoyable read.
Thanks for your support edward
Every girl has a unique attraction, so true. Connections are good and with the right person it could truly flourish
I agree with you kid...Thanks for reading my poem
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