I want to hear it from you ( senryu)

Gelyn

 

Just say one last word

I will never let you go,

Try and you will see.

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  • Augustus

    Much love in a small package.

    • Gelyn

      thank you

    • Goldfinch60

      Very good Senryu.

      • Gelyn

        thanks šŸ™‚

      • rrodriguez

        I like how you build tension in just three lines. It begins with tenderness but ends with an unexpected edge. Short, intriguing, and emotionally charged! Well done!

        • Gelyn

          Thank you Mr. Rodriguez.
          I really appreciate that. Iā€™m glad you enjoyed it and noticed the little twist at the end. It means a lot to know the words resonated with you...

          Gel



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