As we walked together,
I felt the cold comfort of your knife
Against my throat.
You sensed my trust,
As those beautiful moments
Of uncertainty passed.
In the darkness of your heart:
The power to end my existence
At any moment; I was afraid.
Not fearful for love of life
Or the mysteries of this place,
But for love of you.
You let me into the darkest chambers of your being;
I forgave you.
You revealed to me your insecurities and secrets.
I loved you.
You promised me.
I believed you.
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Author:
Hali (
Offline) - Published: May 29th, 2017 04:58
- Category: Love
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Comments3
Nicely written blueoctopus, it never feels like a first poem of yours ,hope you should have written many before it...
Thanks, that means a lot to me 🙂 It is my first poem which I have published, but i have written a few before
WELCOME BLUEOCTOPUS (INTRIGUING NAME ?) True Love is just as you describe it ~ dangerous but O so delicious ~ truly "A Glimpse of Eternity" You are nearer to Heaven in your Lovers Arms ~ than anywhere else on Earth ! Great poem ~ great subject ~ LOVE ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my poems thanks ~ B
Dark and beautiful . Truly a walk on the wild side .
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