Our Glimpse of Eternity

Hali

As we walked together,

I felt the cold comfort of your knife

Against my throat.

 

You sensed my trust,

As those beautiful moments

Of uncertainty passed.

 

In the darkness of your heart:

The power to end my existence

At any moment; I was afraid.

 

Not fearful for love of life

Or the mysteries of this place,

But for love of you.

 

You let me into the darkest chambers of your being;

I forgave you.

 

You revealed to me your insecurities and secrets.

I loved you.

 

You promised me.

I believed you.

  • Author: Hali (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 29th, 2017 04:58
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 74
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  • Rajkumar

    Nicely written blueoctopus, it never feels like a first poem of yours ,hope you should have written many before it...

    • Hali

      Thanks, that means a lot to me 🙂 It is my first poem which I have published, but i have written a few before

    • BRIAN & ANGELA

      WELCOME BLUEOCTOPUS (INTRIGUING NAME ?) True Love is just as you describe it ~ dangerous but O so delicious ~ truly "A Glimpse of Eternity" You are nearer to Heaven in your Lovers Arms ~ than anywhere else on Earth ! Great poem ~ great subject ~ LOVE ~ Yours BRIAN Please check my poems thanks ~ B

    • swingline

      Dark and beautiful . Truly a walk on the wild side .



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