Marriage
A show of love
A show of commitment
Marriage is forever
It will never be nonexistent
Time is spent together
Strong connections are made
A home is built together
Sharing both names
A family will be made as a unit of one
Sharing love and harmony with others they love
Marriage is meant forever
But this doesn't always work
Marriage can breakdown and leave people lonesome
Through falling out of love, death or betrayal
Hearts are broken
Their Marriage is seen as a 'fail'
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Author:
ShannonXx (
Offline) - Published: May 29th, 2017 11:59
- Category: Love
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Comments6
Yes this is an
Excellent poem
Shannon...
Well done !!!
Thank you, greatly appreciated
I am a straight MAN so I am attracted to Ladies ~ because you are beautiful & fragrant ! I have met several Ladies whose skills complement mine and of course being YIN & YANG we would be able to (sometime after marriage) ~ to share our GENES and start a Family etc. For me ~ personality ~ the inner lady ~ is the most important thing ~ more important that color ~ class or culture ! If we got married ~ I hope and pray it would be forever (or until parted by DEATH). It is very serious step ~ and if children are involved DIVORCE can blight their lives. I think some get married too YOUNG ? For a MAN over 25 would be sensible and for a LADY over 20 we need to be ADULT and RESPONSIBLE ~ I do have a GF and we are in Love and hope to be married sometime. Thanks for sharing & caring ~ Yours BRIAN XX
I totally agree with your comment, I hope things go well with you and your gf in the future. Thanks for your comment
Very beautiful,well done. There is a church, I believe to be true, that holds that maarraige is forever, that death is only the lifting of the veil.....not till death do us part, but forever. It seems that the same spirit inspires you, consciously or unconsciously. Keep expressing yourself! 😆
Thank you! I definitely believe love is forever no matter what
I believe you believe truly 😆
A marriage without God binding everything together runs a doubtful course . I married twice , and am twice divorced . I chose wives , not Godly women . Now if I ever remarry again I promised God he could pick my wife as I certainly failed .
Yes that is true, I'm sure next time you will find the right women. There is a right person for everyone I believe, it just takes time finding them. Thank you for the comment
Enjoyed.
I'm glad, thanks for the comment
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