whats depression you ask?

NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...

whats depression you ask?

its where you cant move

not able to do a simple task


its not being able to eat

when you haven't eaten yet

you're left defeated


its feeling sad beyond words

not being able to smile

and hating the world


its not going out 

to see your friends

cause you dont know if they care or not


the feeling of hate

not being wanted

and thinking"is this my fate"


its looking at the road

and thinking too much

your mind is an over load


its constant fear

worrying bout life

and if you should be here


so whats depression you ask?

its hurt and hell

and your life is its flask


  • P.H.Rose

    This is very good...

  • J.D. Treick

    Knowing and battling depression myself, I can really relate to this. Thank you for the eloquence!

  • Louis Gibbs

    Well structured poem, Rachel! I especially like the last line. Clever.

  • Goldfinch60

    Good emotive write.

  • The Invisible

    Very great word choice and honestly I'm happy someone actually actual define depression and not as just "sad for a long time" so thank you. Good work.

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