NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel...

whats depression you ask?

whats depression you ask?

its where you cant move

not able to do a simple task

 

its not being able to eat

when you haven't eaten yet

you're left defeated

 

its feeling sad beyond words

not being able to smile

and hating the world

 

its not going out 

to see your friends

cause you dont know if they care or not

 

the feeling of hate

not being wanted

and thinking"is this my fate"

 

its looking at the road

and thinking too much

your mind is an over load

 

its constant fear

worrying bout life

and if you should be here

 

so whats depression you ask?

its hurt and hell

and your life is its flask

Comments5

  • P.H.Rose

    This is very good...

  • J.D. Treick

    Knowing and battling depression myself, I can really relate to this. Thank you for the eloquence!

  • Louis Gibbs

    Well structured poem, Rachel! I especially like the last line. Clever.

  • Goldfinch60

    Good emotive write.

  • The Invisible

    Very great word choice and honestly I'm happy someone actually actual define depression and not as just "sad for a long time" so thank you. Good work.



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