whats depression you ask?
its where you cant move
not able to do a simple task
its not being able to eat
when you haven't eaten yet
you're left defeated
its feeling sad beyond words
not being able to smile
and hating the world
its not going out
to see your friends
cause you dont know if they care or not
the feeling of hate
not being wanted
and thinking"is this my fate"
its looking at the road
and thinking too much
your mind is an over load
its constant fear
worrying bout life
and if you should be here
so whats depression you ask?
its hurt and hell
and your life is its flask
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NEVER_LOSE_HOPE/ rachel... (
Offline) - Published: May 30th, 2017 16:24
- Category: Sad
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Comments5
This is very good...
Knowing and battling depression myself, I can really relate to this. Thank you for the eloquence!
Well structured poem, Rachel! I especially like the last line. Clever.
Good emotive write.
Very great word choice and honestly I'm happy someone actually actual define depression and not as just "sad for a long time" so thank you. Good work.
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