I went down to the river
To watch the water flow
To ease some part of me
That might have once been soul.
I watched it tumble by
Alone upon the bank
And know that what was soul
Had already sank
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Author:
Jabberwocky (
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- Comment from author about the poem: The photo is of the river Kelvin in Glasgow City
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Sorry, was that the one I walked on when I was out fishing, washed up on the bank. It responded to fresh water and a hug promising to return.
Nicely done.
That is what I respond to 🙂
Your soul may have sank but it will rise again and you will move forward. Good write.
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