At this moment. I am rubber. Stretched to my limits. Ready to pop. Let me deflate, let all the air rush out of me, turn me into a lifeless outside. Ready to burst. But no.
God says -- no.
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Author:
aciaa. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I can't define what this poem means to me, but there are many deep thoughts involved, about religion, life physically and mentally and my soul.
- Category: Reflection
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WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ which expresses ~ very graphically ~ how a lot of us feel ~ and certainly felt when we were TEENS ~ Ready to BURST ! We are like balloons and we go into overload every day until we reach "Bursting Point" There is a "cri de coeur" in you poem ~ "Don't let me BURST ~ please GOD ~ let me DEFLATE ~ AMEN" I agree ~ when a balloon bursts ~ or a human being goes into melt down that is the end ! But a deflated BALLOON can be reinflated and be a thing of beauty again ~ we all love Balloons ! Your mention of GOD is very interesting ! On my own I would have burst years ago ~ BUT ~ I believe in GOD and in return he fills me with His Holy Spirit who controls my life and stops me from "over-inflating and bursting" ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Pl;ease check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
hey, there thanks a lot. I love hearing your interpretation. That's great! Amen.
I'll definitely check out your poems!
So short and straight to the point, loved it
Thank you !
I enjoyed that your poem cuts deep in such little time and speaks volumes off of my screen to my ears. I can hear your feelings within the writing please continue writing.
I loved to hear that it touched you. Thank you!
Really enjoyed this, a great write 🙂
Thank you, great that you did.
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