Line-Dancing.
For enjoying best method of lively
line-dancing I
vote for becoming closer entwined
with all the inside
buttons of cotton-white masculine
lusty leg-jiving.
Nothing can beat the expression
of freedom when
my slip catches, on-line, the length
of your 'jamas or vest,
flinging caution to wind this checks
my shyness and gets
me excited like someone possessed.
Enraptured night-things
caught high in alluring wild twisting,
the wind's tempo brings
flap into each jump and fling
and wraps style around undies drying
like Cupid on the wing.
Togetherness bouncing in blissful tease
by easy cavorting
a public love-snuggling duly increases
in slightest of breeze,
unashamed waving of hold and release
flouts sensual zeal
with show of fervent intention flaunting
in open frenzy of squeeze.
I, blushing with images, scurry indoors
asking why when dry
clean and worn these very same things
no longer wish to perform ?
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: June 10th, 2017 05:01
- Comment from author about the poem: Just my bit of weekend fun-writing - hope when you read you enjoy.
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Comments5
Fay, you have an amazing talent to compose on any subject and turn it into a meaningful poem! - Raj
Ah - so pleased you enjoyed the fun subject here Raj - I saw washing on line and thought of the verse.
Great subject and superb bit of writing.
Thanks for your valued opinion Michael - -thought this would suffice my need to lighten the day with this bit of fun.
That was a great deal of fun! It's probably best that they lose their spirits once dry or we would be accused of much PDA. Nice!
Ha ha - I agree with your comments dear Heather. Thank you for the visit and read.
Fay, I share and respect the attention you pay to the shape of a poem, as displayed so well in this one. To me, the fact that it is so 'comforting' visually, adds much to its value and impact. Well done, and fun poem!
I really appreciate your valued and thoughtful comments on form and subject of acceptable versing - thanks a lot Louis and glad you enjoyed the fun-poem.
I thought I was the only one that got excited over ladies undies hanging on the clothes line. This is truly a remarkable bit of writing granted just for fun.
Ha ha - thanks for that confession dear A. - - glad you enjoyed the fun-read.
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