Faces in the mountain looking down at me
Mother natures magic for all to see
I look at the face and its watching me
Colors of the earth so rich and alive
Animals of the lands eat to survive
Mother natures magic an amazing site
Her anger can give such a fright
Death and destruction the earth will heal
New magic, she will soon reveal
Colors of the earth,browns,reds and greens
Crystal blue waters it's a beautiful dream
Faces in the mountain looking down at me
Mother natures magic for all to see
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You are so kind!! Thank you
This is a very BEAUTIFUL Peom TERESA ! We call them "Picture Poems" in which the poem "paints a picture" relating to the TITLE ~ in this case ~ FACES IN THE MOUNTAIN. Whenever I look at a Hill or a Mountain ~ I see ever changing images ~ faces ~ forms and suggestive shapes ~ especially somewhere like BRYCE CANYON ~ USA. The other point you make (and this is my experience too) is that the images are dynamic and not static ! In BRYCE CANYON ~ they constantly change with the movement of the Sun ! This is an excellent "Picture Poem" because it stirs my imagination and brings to memory all the "faces" I have seen ~ in all the Mountains I have enjoyed ~ it is a delight to read and meditate on ! You might get a negative critique but only from someone completely lacking in imagination ~ who sees the mountain but fails to see a single face ! Love it ~ Hugs ~ BRIAN (UK)
Thank you so much Brian was feeling a little down after the negative comment which I know will happen. But thank you for the reassurance
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