The strawberries are red
They have a sweet smell
And is soft to the touch
This sweet juicy fruit
Crunch munch gobble
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Author:
ab120ma (
Offline) - Published: June 10th, 2017 23:09
- Comment from author about the poem: First attempt at writing poetry 😀
- Category: Nature
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Bravo for having a crack, ab120ma. I'll just give you a heads up that you've mixed up the tenses a little - you've gone from 'they' to 'is'. Check that out and keep writing.
Yes - and are to the touch - but otherwise a great first posting - keep at it.
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