Star Eater





I ate all the stars last night

Every single one of them

Then I had a comet cone for desset

I thought it was so much fun


Now I have Starburn

And I'm burping up rays of light

It sunburns inside my throat

It's no longer a delight


And that comet cone

was way too sugary

So I let it all spew away


Now I have to learn 

all new constellations

And it all so

Confucius me

  • Author: swingline (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 12th, 2017 02:18
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 40


  • Goldfinch60

    Confucius he say who turned the stars out?
    Good fun write and I also find those comet cones a bit vicious when they go down.

    • swingline

      Ha ha , yes they do . Thank you Goldfinch60 for commenting .

    • Louis Gibbs

      Wonderfully amusing poem, swingline! Thanks for sharing.

      • swingline

        Thank you Louis for reading

      • orchidee

        A fine write S.

        • swingline

          Thank you also orchidee for reading .

          • Jeff

            Well done....nice write

          • swingline

            Thank you 6Pure6Evil6 for reading .

          • Rajkumar

            Its nice work line

            • swingline

              Thank you for saying so Rajkumar

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