There has always been something about the sky that has made me feel less important,
I'm not sure whether it was how small I seemed compared to the clouds,
or that it reminded me of you.
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Author:
Blue (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 12th, 2017 09:22
- Comment from author about the poem: This is my first poem and I know it isn't the best.
- Category: Love
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Comments3
I really like your first poem, and look forward to more. Welcome to MPS, navyblue!
Hey it has meaning that's what matters. It has a story behind it, one that made me interested so don't doubt yourself or bring yourself down just because it's your first. That's how we all started, just keep writing and write what you want to tell. I'll be looking out for more! 🙂
I look forward to reading more of your poems, is one certainly shows your feelings and that is what poetry is all about. Welcome to MPS.
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