They said she only has a little time
Before she drifts off to the light
After they said that she'd have a long life
I asked the doctor what was wrong
He said her heart had grown too strong
I asked the doc just what that means
He said her heart was bigger than it seemed
As a person made of belief I did not understand where having a big heart could go wrong
All I knew was what I thought i had to do
On Her final days I bashed her with hate
I didn't visit her as much
When I did I rejected her
I even told her she should cry because she was going to die
I thought this was helping
I was trying to shrink her heart
She didn't know that I was cruel
Because I loved her too much to loose
On her last day could take no more
I yelled in her face on how is was her fault
Her fault for loving everyone and everything the way she did
Why'd she have to keep loving me even when I threw at her all my grief
The monitor started going in and out
I realized that there was a war roaring inside of her
She was trying to decide whether to Live or Die
1 hour later...
She died
For five years straight I have a battle with love
I think the day she died was because she felt unloved...
By me
But I think she got to that position in the first place because she loved too much
And even though I still don't know
I will always remember my war with Love five years ago
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Author:
Descreat (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Not a true story
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Comments15
Agreed
This is s great write...very well done. Great, great job
Thank-You.
This is heart breaking, I started tearing up.
Sorry about that. But it bring a smile to my face knowing that my poem caused so much emotion.
It's all good, and that's good it should. It was amazing granted sad but you put it in a way that was relatable. Good job 🙂
Thank-you.
You are welcome.
Wow 😳. Good poem.
Thanks. I appreciate the "wow" factor.
hugs to u
thanks
Definitely.
Oh my Discreat....
I LOVE this so much
It is brilliant.....
Sorry I've taken so
Long to look at your work
I will be keeping an
Eye on it in future...
Well done lady !!!
Thankyou!!! 🙂
This poem is a sucker punch to the gut. This is grief. Very freaking powerful.
Thanksssss. Is it really?
Thanksssss. Is it really?
Thanksssss. Is it really?
Thanksssss. Is it really?
Thanksssss. Is it really?
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