Too much love

Discreation

They said she only has a little time

Before she drifts off to the light

After they said that she'd have a long life

I asked the doctor what was wrong

He said her heart had grown too strong

I asked the doc just what that means 

He said her heart was bigger than it  seemed

As a person made of belief I did not understand where having a big heart could go wrong

All I knew was what I thought i had to do

 

On Her final days I bashed her with hate

I didn't visit her as much 

When I did I rejected her

I even told her she should cry because she was going to die

I thought this was helping

I was trying to shrink her heart

She didn't know that I was cruel

Because I loved her too much to loose

 

On her last day could take no more

I yelled in her face on how is was her fault 

Her fault for loving everyone and everything the way she did

Why'd she have to keep loving me even when I threw at her all my grief

 

The monitor started going in and out 

I realized that there was a war roaring inside of her

She was trying to decide whether to Live or Die

1 hour later...

She died

 

For five years straight I have a battle with love

I think the day she died was because she felt unloved...

By me

But I think she got to that position in the first place because she loved too much

 

And even though I still don't know

I will always remember my war with Love five years ago

  • Author: Descreat (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 12th, 2017 11:05
  • Comment from author about the poem: Not a true story
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments15

  • Discreation

    Agreed

  • Jeff

    This is s great write...very well done. Great, great job

  • The Invisible

    This is heart breaking, I started tearing up.

    • Discreation

      Sorry about that. But it bring a smile to my face knowing that my poem caused so much emotion.

      • The Invisible

        It's all good, and that's good it should. It was amazing granted sad but you put it in a way that was relatable. Good job 🙂

        • Discreation

          Thank-you.

          • The Invisible

            You are welcome.

          • Mello

            Wow 😳. Good poem.

            • Discreation

              Thanks. I appreciate the "wow" factor.

            • avigail

              hugs to u

            • Discreation

              thanks

            • Discreation

              Definitely.

            • P.H.Rose

              Oh my Discreat....
              I LOVE this so much
              It is brilliant.....
              Sorry I've taken so
              Long to look at your work
              I will be keeping an
              Eye on it in future...
              Well done lady !!!

            • Discreation

              Thankyou!!! 🙂

            • Digoclifford_spellbound

              This poem is a sucker punch to the gut. This is grief. Very freaking powerful.

            • Discreation

              Thanksssss. Is it really?

            • Discreation

              Thanksssss. Is it really?

            • Discreation

              Thanksssss. Is it really?

            • Discreation

              Thanksssss. Is it really?

            • Discreation

              Thanksssss. Is it really?



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