Deep and confusing,
Surrounding yet…. astounding.
Your affections like sad reflections,
Confounding like a puzzle,
Perplexing as tho to be sweet and caressing,
It hurts me like a knife a nudge to end a life.
Hope of love, fickle as a dove.
In your embrace, lie I doth taste, bitter sweet made like hate.
It poisons your thought, you let it bind and blind twisting your mind caught in a lie.
Prickley and fierce your embrace doth pierce so deep and slow.
Your sadnesses blows like winter's snow.
Your embrace once held happiness and respect,
Why do I only feel sadness and regret?
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Author:
Galen Alhazred (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 12th, 2017 14:14
- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is about the moment I knew my fiance decided it was over, her disconnection was palatable in our hug at that second for just a second.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments3
Wow, most amazing very sad yet nicely written. The font to just makes it seem I don't know it just fits the whole poem.
I'm a typist at heart I hate computers and love everything about writing down to the fresh sent of hot ink or the texture of fine parchment, I hope iv captured all of this I'm trying to make art with words and create mental images not drawn.
You did, I mean even though it's a machine typing it all out I wasn't hard to feel all that you were feeling when you experienced this and also when you wrote this. I too love writing my poems over typing them out but either way I feel if you are really committed and into your poems it doesn't matter what form you choose the reader can feel what you do.
Very good emotive write.
Always glad for feed back ty goldfinch
For a long time I've been looking to read poems from people from this generation. I was curious what the youngish people wright. About what are the feelings put into writing now a days. I'm happy to have found you. Fresh. I have a son your age and he is a rapper. He is a poet too. Thanks, very nice writing.
I hope to see his work abouts check out my rap if you liked this!
Ok. Will do.
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