The Unknown

The Invisible

Along the street I look

For something that life once took

Finding it would fix my heart

The one that the world tore apart

People would just walk right through me

As if they couldn’t see

Ignoring me as though I wasn’t there

Shouting at the world for pretending to ever care

Running in every single direction there is

Turning over every rock to see if there’s anything I missed

Keep passing this same thing each day

Something always made me scatter the other way

Got an unknown feeling whenever I got around it

That fear inside of me screaming for me to quit

I’ve gone everywhere I could

Yet again my legs led me here to this piece of wood

Panic spreads throughout my body as I feel compelled to move towards that door

Sad thing is, I don’t even know exactly what I’m looking for.

  • Author: The Invisible (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 13th, 2017 14:27
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  • Jeff

    This is a very well done write...i can certainly relate....great job

    • The Invisible

      Thank you, and a part of wishes you didn't yet I mean I'm glad you know someone out there knows how you feel at least.

      • Jeff

        I understand what you mean....and i promise you, you WILL find your way...but learn from the journey so as to be the person you were meant to be.

        • The Invisible

          Thank you, I believe I will too just trying to figure out when is the issue. I wish I could show you other poems but only one per day 😛 but um, hope you don't mind me asking how do you relate?

          • Jeff

            Im 45 yrs old....and have spent must of that time locked up...i was trying to find myself all those years, unfortunately for me, i was raised in a family that was made up of criminals...so my "way" was always criminal. Plus i was a raging alcoholic...see....i was looking for the right thing for my life...just in the wrong spot. Until i meant my wife...then it all came clear. It may or may not be a wife for you...but my point is....you will find it and the real joy of that knowledge, is the journey it took to gain it...i dont mean to ramble on...but you keep your head up and ALWAYS stay strong and true to you...

            • The Invisible

              Wow, you are a fighter. And it's not a wife for me but there is someone. It's all good ramble on and I will thank you. I'm glad things worked out for you.

              • Jeff

                Lol...STILL working on it my friend...its an ongoing process til death

                • The Invisible

                  Yeah, that's what I've heard 😛

                  • Jeff

                    Lol..believe it

                    • The Invisible

                      I will, thanks again.

                    • Bibbeck

                      Clever write and a nice 'twist' at the end.

                      The unknown is a great part of life and the world, and is what keeps everything so fascinating to discover. It can be scary though, as can any experience for the first time.

                      • The Invisible

                        Yeah well I can't tell if this is going to be a good one or not. But I appreciate your comment.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        The way is there and that door will open into the joy of life.

                        • The Invisible

                          I like how confident you are that that's what's there.



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