Flowers for your death
Darkness from above
Loved you instead
But my love wasn't enough
- Author: Lils (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: June 16th, 2017 04:09
- Category: Sad
- Views: 17
Flowers for your death
Darkness from above
Loved you instead
But my love wasn't enough
Comments2
Provocates the reader immediately into asking questions . Who died ? What is this darkness from above ? And what of your love ? Why was it not enough ?Good poetry always stirs the imagination .
Does death need to be a person?
Good poetry definitely stirs the imagination 😉
Good succinct write.
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