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thoughts • 2:09am

Flowers for your death
Darkness from above
Loved you instead
But my love wasn't enough

  • Author: Lils (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 16th, 2017 04:09
  • Category: Sad
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Comments2

  • swingline

    Provocates the reader immediately into asking questions . Who died ? What is this darkness from above ? And what of your love ? Why was it not enough ?Good poetry always stirs the imagination .

    • Poetic Dan

      Does death need to be a person?

      Good poetry definitely stirs the imagination 😉

    • Goldfinch60

      Good succinct write.



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