alisha.ldn

save me

they say death isn't what it seems;

but she's portrayed as beautiful in my dreams.

constantly hearing sweet whispers in my ear,

"it would be even better if you were no longer here."

thoughts consuming and drowning my head,

it's only matter of time until i'm dead.

Comments5

  • Damaged Soul/Kindred Spirit

    No, it wouldn't be better. What am I gonna do of I can't read your poetry every day? I save you Darlin. Together we can chase those demons right back into that deep dark night. . Okay ?

  • OUTBACK

    THE THING ABOUT (DEATH)* IS UPON (DEATH)* - { YOU } ARE [GONE]*! THERE WILL BE NO YOU LEFT BEHIND* TO (KNOW)* IT ! AH ! (DEATH)* IS BUT THE END* OF THE TEMPORARY* EXPLORATIONAL* EXPRESSION* OF THAT* WHICH IS (LIFE)* ! THE EXPRESSIONS* OF (LIFE )*END* = {CHANGE}* & { LIFE} * GOES ON - JUST NOT YOU & ME ! = [THE EXPRESSIONS OF LIFE]* ! SO ! NO [PROBLEM]* - AT ALL ! & {NO CHOISE}* ! AH ! [ IN THE MEANTIME ]* = { LIVE YOUR* LIFE }* !

  • Goldfinch60

    Life does not exist if you are dead and your life is there before you, live it to the full.

    • alisha.ldn

      thank you so much

    • malubotelho

      I was consulting my heart to see what to say about your poem. Could not find a thing. I wish I could transfer the feelings I have in my heart about life and its profound meaning. To live it better one need to observe, admire, live and love each moment. Even when it seems it is not so graceful if you stop your thoughts and just observe it without judgment you can deeply find the beautiful side of that moment. Gracefully or not.

      • alisha.ldn

        your poem has touched me so much, thank you xxx

        • malubotelho

          Always welcome

        • ShannonXx

          This is so sad but beautiful at the same time



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