save me

they say death isn't what it seems;

but she's portrayed as beautiful in my dreams.

constantly hearing sweet whispers in my ear,

"it would be even better if you were no longer here."

thoughts consuming and drowning my head,

it's only a matter of time until i'm dead.


  • Goldfinch60

    Life does not exist if you are dead and your life is there before you, live it to the full.

    • alisha

      thank you so much

    • malubotelho

      I was consulting my heart to see what to say about your poem. Could not find a thing. I wish I could transfer the feelings I have in my heart about life and its profound meaning. To live it better one need to observe, admire, live and love each moment. Even when it seems it is not so graceful if you stop your thoughts and just observe it without judgment you can deeply find the beautiful side of that moment. Gracefully or not.

      • alisha

        your poem has touched me so much, thank you xxx

        • malubotelho

          Always welcome

        • ShannonXx

          This is so sad but beautiful at the same time

          • alisha

            thank you x

          • Saima

            Such a deep meaningful poem, amazing x

            • alisha

              thank you so much love x

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