This is the first time in a long time that I've wrote
There's just been a hole in the boat
All my thoughts just leave me to drown in my sorrow
And one day there won't be a tomorrow
There's new people on this amazing site
I wouldn't of known if I stepped into the light
You're all great poets as I can see
Way better than even me
My thoughts are nothing when it's clouded by darkness
My thoughts disappear and I deeply miss
I have nothing that intrigues me to write
Nothing that frees my sight
I honestly have no idea what to do
I ask myself who am I, yes who..
It's been months since I've wrote a poem
My creativity has just decided to rome
I know this isn't great and you all will judge
Though I don't care, right now I just need a nudge
Some will say while others hide behind their screens
And not people who just are gonna be mean
Well here you go damage I tried my best
Now maybe I'm done having a rest
I'll try to write everyday
Whatever it may
But even if it's not perfect, it is my own work of art
That came deep within my heart
Don't listen to what others criticize
Because they're just speaking lies
Every poet starts out small
They just learned how to crawl
You will grow and learn
But don't let words burn
You are amazing in your own way
So say whatever you want to say
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Author:
WolfIsControlledByTheDemons (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: June 19th, 2017 00:05
- Comment from author about the poem: Damaged soul this is for you I haven't wrote in forever and I'm not well anymore I know I shouldn't of jumped off that building but I did.. Although I'm back and in decent condition I'll be here until I get that surgery for my back Until then I'll try to write I know this isn't amazing and a lot of you will hate it but whatever Though I'm trying to write again..I really am...And I know none of you realize I have gone and a lot of you don't know my but I'm nobody and hi
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Comments5
I love it.
What?
copy paste it
Yep.
Thanks
Sorry about the before comment.
Wtf....um okay and wdym by copy and paste poetboy?
copy and paste the poem because on the site it is written in wingdings for some reason
He means that when you copy and paste the poem, you can understand what it says.
Oh that...sorry bout that lol but okay
It's cool.
There is no better poem than this. Straight from your heart and each word is an expression of you. Please continue writing for everyone on this site as you are incredible at it. It may even help you find out who you are, keep your head high.
There are better poems than this. There's clearly better poems than this. You don't know what happened and you don't know me!! I know everyone on this sight is incredible I'm not stupid!! I've been here for a long time. But yeah just gonna continue writing 👍 And sorry such a bitch... I'm in a phase
Everyone lets things go in their own way, you may not think so, but this poem is incredible.
Thank you and yeah ik
Your poem is great, way to add layers. If you don't mind...but this is freakin' awesome.
Lol thank you Discreat 🙂
Of course.
This is a very good heartfelt write, I am glad that you are going to keep writing, I look forward to reading it.
Thank you goldfinch and me too it feels great to write again
huh
copy and paste
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