Goldfinch60

Each of My Days.

As the sun rises so do I,

The world is out there

For me to enjoy.

I sit in the garden in the early morn

Listening to natures symphony,

As it awakes to this fine day.

I look up and see natures canvas,

Blue with a scattering of white,

The white moving so slowly

Through the blue.

This is the peace of my world,

This peace always is there as the sun rises,

It is always there as the sun sets.

I am there as well, l enjoying the glory

At the beginning and at the end

Of each of my days.

Comments8

  • Jooles

    Lovely poem.....im dusk kinda girl. ....so peaceful

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Jooles, dusk is wonderful.

    • Renzi

      I've fallen in love with sunrise 💓 Discovering the beauty of each new day. Lovely poem x

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Renzi, I like both ends of the day as I find I can relax in them.

      • Frank Prem

        Yes, enjoy them all GF. They're a wonderful show, daily.

        • Goldfinch60

          They certainly are. Thanks for your comment Frank.

        • kathyhall

          I am glad you enjoy them both. As you should and I sooo enjoyed this poem Wonderful write!!

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you so much for your comments Kat, much appreciated.

            • kathyhall

              I so enjoy your writings and your company in poetland!!

            • Damaged Soul/Kindred Spirit

              I have new appreciation for both. One of my regrets is that I didn't view enough of these with Michelle. Your poem as always lifts me up and makes my morn complete.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thanks Robert, I always try to be positive and try to get others to be the same.

              • orchidee

                A fine write G/F.. Why do I spoil it and say ' And then it darkened over and rained'!? heehee. Well we need rain too, I suppose, but that's not your point here!
                Know what you mean - I see some little birds first thing some days. A big, but friendly, black cat, did not catch any, thankfully!

                • Goldfinch60

                  Rain would be good at the moment! Perhaps I could go out in it and cool off!!

                • malubotelho

                  Wow! Your writing is sooo good. I'm always very touched about poetry. Reading it inspire us to write more. My first language is portuguese and I can create good rhymes in Portuguese but my English is limited. I'm excited because I've found this community.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you malubotelho,. All any of us can do is our best and that is the way we should always be. Doing that we can even surprise ourselves.

                  • kevin browne

                    lovely writing. well done x

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you Kevin, much appreciated.

                      • kevin browne

                        very welcome x



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