Your face
I see so often
Stunning
A model for everyone to insight
It's all just lies
You show that side
Beautiful and kind
Only at your chosen times
The other side
Ugly
Using words like weapons to fight
You have two faces
Opposite to eachother
Which is the truth
Or are they both You
You were my friend
Then the ugly side came out to play
I heard these words
Damaging my ears
Making me feel entirely low
Those words leaving your vinegar lips like salt thrown out so cold
With your aggressive tone
Ready to pounce
Your next victim
Excited to torture someone else
Is it only so you could love yourself
Is it a defence
Do you build your wall up tall
Or just your character
One so cruel
You may fool people now
But soon they will see
Your the one with two faces
You will now never fool me
- Author: ShannonXx ( Offline)
- Published: June 22nd, 2017 16:55
- Comment from author about the poem: This is about a friend I once had who completely fooled me at how two faced and bitchy they were and how they weren't a true friend at all.
- Category: Friendship
- Views: 1001
Comments9
spot on write here ShannonXx. there is only one answer to this, only ever trust in your own self and don't allow other peoples reflections land upon your plate. that's where the trouble starts x
Thank you! Yeah I completely agree! x
we have more then two faces
Yeah I guess so
Not everyone is worth your attention, and I'm thankful you saw through it.
Thanks! And yes me too
Everyone has a reason
For what they do
Some it's because of
What's happened in
Their lives and are not
Strong enough to get past
It, others, well it's just in
Their DNA.... if you don't
Let anyone hurt you
They never will...
Great poem Shannon
Yeah that is true! And thanks
A very nice poem about a jekyll and hyde type of person. Unfortunately there are too many of them around and we usually find out only after it is too late. Good writing as far as I am concerned.
Yeah that is true! And thanks
Great writing! Even visually, this poems speaks to the fine line between the face of good and the "other" face...sad that cruelty comes so easily to so many...keep writing! You will only add to the good!
Thank you! Yes it is sad
It always happens. Very beautiful write.
Yes unfortunately it does! And thanks
Good write, there are many people about with two faces but there are alo many who are good and you see them for the goodness that they have.
Thank you, and yes that's true
never let any bodies stupidity bring you down,just look where it comes from,not the person so much as where they are in their lives
Yeah that is true! Thanks for the advice and comment
my pleasure
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