You cause the world to stop spinning with a mere hello. So one could only imagine the damage you'd do by gracing me with a smile or a laugh. The world would probably shake according to the vibrations emitting from your chest. Or what if your tender lips neared my ear and told me they loved me ? I'm sure I would melt along with all the ice on this world's surface. Heaven forbid you kiss me with those impeccable lips. Wild fires would appear sporatically throughout our world's forests, though none of them a match for the one you would have initiated upon my skin. That one would, I'm sure, leave no area of my body untouched or unscathed.
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Jaelynn Annalise (Pseudonym) (
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WELCOME JAELYNN (nice name) Thanks for a very elegant first poem, Love the title and the matching content. I am a MAN (33) but i can empathise with every line in your LOVE POEM. I am sure you know that Men feel that way as well ! Love the last line because that is just how CYBER LOVE & FANTASY LOVE leaves me feeling. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ BRIAN (UK). Please check my poems ~ Thanks B
Thank you so much for commenting, I was honestly nervous to share this as I have never published my writing before but your compliments have given me a push to continue and venture into this new part of me . Also I'm so glad you understood what I was talking about !! I didn't think anyone would . Thanks again😊
Imagination is such a powerful force. Just think, everything man-made that exists started out in somebody's imagination. Who says your imagination cannot become reality? Maybe not with the person you refer to in your poem, but maybe with somebody else.
But no matter what, it created this wonderful poem. Keep on using your imagination and keep on writing!
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