so come on and lets go
far above the sun and the moon
at a distant place there is more room
it comes with ease for you have the keys
dont have to ram the castles gate to seize
just be you and it comes with ease
along with being humble comes a distant rumble
like thunder your under dont think blunder
to ponder good thoughts is a happiness of sorts
if you be with no distraction
believe in the idea of satisfaction
in the action of thought is a fraction of ought
free will is definitely the matter at hand
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Author:
onepauly (
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- Comment from author about the poem: this poem brings me peace of mind
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Well said, we all need to go to this special place once in a while!
peaceful !
I love reading out of this a longing for the infinite... I share this with you my friend.
and I you
Good write and a good place to be.
have you been their
Oh yes, many times. I can find that place in music, in nature but especially as I walk along My River, the further I walk the more I come to that place of peace within me.
I used to go to a river a lot sometimes more then one day and night. i found the greatest peace I've ever known. i think i heard a song with those lyrics. also i seen the sun and the moon from this side.
Very good onepauly
I like this very much
I hope a lot of people do
thank you for the comment
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